Iiight...coo beat...
Qualitys not good... im having a hard time making out what ur saying... The hook shit was pretty coo.. melodic.. that shit always works on a hook..coo... The verse flow was a bit choppy but the flow was iight.. Delivery needs work.. but i see potential...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798
Peep that when u can. 1