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Old 11-22-04, 12:17 AM   #33
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Voted For: Thousand Miles

THIS WAS A WACK BATTLE...SERIOUSLY...YALL BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE...

ILLUSON...you verse was structured wrong, and made no sense. No punches that really landed hard in there, and no personals what-so-ever...i think youre rhymin were better in this match-up tho, but overall verse was weak to me...3/15
CROSSROADS...youre verse was the better structured of tha 2, but u also didnt have any punches that landed. youre rhyming were not on point, but u did have some personals in there...i think u should elevate. this seemed like one of ur first battles, but i wasnt feeling it that much. it wasnt making much sense to me...but w/e...5/15
OVERALL...i think yall both need alotta practice...work on ur structure before yall enter yall next battle...and try to be more creative and work on punches...
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