damn synickle...this is a great example that poetry doesnt need to rhyme to be good...


...a very deep and powerful piece in its own sense...and some of the lines...like:

As the Earth lies there and watches
The beast and I are silhouetted
like two lovers in the murky shadows
I’m dying


were excellent...at times breathtaking in there own right...


Well all i can say is...this piece HAS MOST DEF hit hard and deep...i feel you for sure on this...how one can become become soul-less and whatnot...becoming one with death and whatnot...well i aint going to go any further...



but damn - seriously, you really do have some game going there...you have the variation, the ability to capture the pure essence of what you are depicting, usage of vocab is excellent, and you let your artistic 'vision' not be dicated too much by the structure and what not..


keep em coming...i'll read more later (probably tomorrow)...

...respect...