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Old 11-22-04, 10:52 AM   #16
Wickedclown
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Voted For: M-Dog

aight this was a pretty decent battle, both of yall came pretty hard and i respect that shit. aight imma break it down for you right quick:

Blackwell: aight you had an "ok" rhyme scheeme, flow was ok and so was wordplay, ya could have done a lil better on the punches and personals i think... structure was.....HORRIBLE.... so work on that shit, it made no sence, you had an ok verse except ya structure.... over all i would give ya verse a 5/10

M-Dog: aight i liked this verse, short but to the point... you flowed very well the whole verse and the wordplay was on lock..... it was creative and this line made it funny:

18 battles and 12 times u experienced a "herb-bashing",
Ur vocabs like ur looks.........them "words ain't dashing",

loved that line homie..... structure was awsome and the punches and personals obveously hit hard... this was a great verse 8/10

overall really good battle here... blackwell you just need to work on structure and making the punches and personals hit a lil bit harder homie... good battle yall but M takes this one


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