mess with me get cooked
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Voted For: Kwell
This kid is beyond basic, but he still thinks he's dope
fuckin fruit, he's mad cuz he's unwanted, he cant-elope
i dont play wit kids, this child cant even stay out past dark
grow the fuck up, n quit bein a fuckin newb widd'em hash marks///
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW HIT HARDER THOUGH BE CREATIVE
i'll leave u stuck widda huge fine, when i spray lines your way
my punch'll hit ya teeth, unleash, n let ya canines astray
so u doubt me, u dont think i'll leave u slaughtered, clown?
heh, u git ya shit mixed up then, what u spit is watered down
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" IT DIDNT KINDA MAKE ANY SENSE BUT IT DID FLOW EXPLAIN CHA PUNCHES AIIIIIGHT
dont knock my style, when yours is the one that needs fixin
i see u prewritin, so i know u gon lose based on pre diction
i can come weak n still kill ya, these days things is changin
do i need a closer? maybe or maybe not, i'ma leave ya hangin...
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT GOOD FLOW 'OK" PUNCH NICE CLOSA
KWELL- U NEED TO HIT HARDER WITH YOUR PUNCHES, IT CAME A LIL BASIC, AND MAKE SURE CHA PUNCHES MAKES SENSE
u dont wanna test, fam...cuz even if the tech jams
i'll let my knives cut-in, like they wanted the next dance/
if i clapped u, i'd earn a grip...but i dont need a burner, since
my apperance would make ya body shake, like recieve some turbulence/
^^^^^^^^^^^ THAT WAS NOT AN GOOD PART CHA PUNCHES WERE BASIC WAY BASIC~! AND DONT RUN-OFF CHA SENTENCES LIKE U SAID "SINCE" IT MAKES THA READA DONT WANT TO READ CHA SHIT AT ALL
been in drag the longest, rockin dresses wit tha earrings
so ur the real king of queens, fuck the television series/
wanna meet superstars? i'll grab heaters n use the tool
so tell me if ya angels look as good as Cam Diaz n Lucy Liu/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ SHIT DONT EVEN MAKE SENSE TO ME CHA PUNCHES ARE TOO BASIC NEEDS CREATIVITY U GOT FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES IS WAT U LACKING AT
i carry the heat, when my missions to torch a brotha
u keep a strap-on, but urs come in different inches n assorted colors/
and Ya dont get females either,with ya clowned features
and If u ever "tied the knot" u got instructions from ya "Scouts Leader"/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA NOT AN GOOD PUNCH EITHER
HANG-MAN= U WAS TOO BASIC IN YOUR VERSE U DIDNT HAD NO CREATIVITY NO DECENT PUNCHES AND NO PERSONALS EITHER
OVERALL= AIIIIIGHT BOTH OF U NEEDS TO ELEVATE CAUSE BOTH OF U KWELL AND HANG-MAN DROPPED BAD BASIC PUNCHES YALL HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES I WASNT FEELING IT FROM BOTH OF U GUYS
KWELL- U HAD FLOW PUNCHES BUT THEY WERENT DECENT U HAD BASIC PUNCHES BUT IT EDGE IT A LIL. BE CREATIVE WITH CHA PUNCHES
HANG-MAN= U CAME TOO BASIC ELEVATE HOMIE ON DEM PUNCHES U DIDNT HAD NO CREATIVITY IN CHA PUNCHES NOR NO DECENT ONES ALL TOO BASIC
MY VOTE GOES TO KWELL JUST FOR HAVING PUNCHES THAT HIT HARDER THAN HIS
HANG-MAN CHA VERSE DIDNT MADE SENSE NOR CHA PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARD U CAME TOO BASIC BE MORE CREATIVE LEARN SOME VOCABS AND DO SOME PERSONALS
*NUFF SAID*
RETURN AN FAV
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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