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Voted For: blackwell

Ite dawg ya talents a misery n ya chances r spoiled
U aint ever had a victory so how can ya claim ya royal?
I'll wreck him coz he aint ever had a complex pun
victims? ur next one as dis battle like false father coz ya shouldnt u've stepped-son
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIGHT U HAD WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE MAYNE AND SOME PERSONALS

Now I feel bad n guilty coz ive started 2 bother ya
fact is i dun wanna give ya another hurricane coz i feel bad for florida
^^^^^^^^ HA WHATS WRONG WITH FLORIDA FOOL~! DISSING MY HOME-TOWN NO NO NO ~! GOOD PERSONAL AND GOOD PUNCH NICE

I'll rip out ya wind-pipe n leave ya words doomed
Thinks hes a gangster but he aint got no cent like cheap perfume
Watch dis nerd bloom like a mushroom as falls 2 his fate
He belongs at da bottom but we didnt say shit even though we all knew his place
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH MAYNE ITS MESSIGN UP DA FLOW ANYWAY U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD DECENT PUNCH HERE ON THIS PART NOR FLOW

Sheer humilation is wot i brung n wot ma mouth dun
coz this is like fixed wrestlin matches..u just cant change da out-come
Its like fight night coz whrerever i am i'll be fighting
In ten minutes he might rite but i can bet money he's pre-writting
ite dis battles over...another wins predicted
coz wen it comes ta victory he always been restricted
PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" NOT AN GOOD CLOSA PLUS~! U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD FLOW NOT AN GOOD PUNCH EITHER

BLACKWELL- U CAME ON AND OFF ON THIS VERSE HERE ON THA 2 BARZ U HAD IT WAS GOOD NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONAL AND THEN U KINDA FELL OFF ON THA LAST 2 BARZ PLUS THA CLOSA MAYNE U GOTS TO KEEP FOCUS NEVA SLACK OFF *NUFF SAID*

You ask How Im royal, its cuz God said so, the other reason being, Some bitch already had TKO/

Im finna get charged with Epsom and duracell, Cuz my Lyrics are Assault and Battery, Leave me like akon Locked away in a jail cell/
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIGHT NICE WORDPLAY NOT AN GOOD FLOW U HAD MULTI'Z THOUGH, DA PUNCHES WERE "EH" "OK"

I got dis battle "locked up", and if you think you gonna beat me, you got "life" fucked up/

Dont feel bad for florida cuz we gonna make it like "kiss", Fuck where u from yall juz yellow and warm like somma kelly's Piss/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I SEE WORDPLAY BUT NO FLOW NOT AN GOOD PUNCH HERE ON THIS PART MAYNE ELEVATE

Naw that aint a kelly diss but Its juz a crooked bitch Im trying to straighten out/

You aint no head busta cuz If I ran up on u, You would prolly do a "BARRY" and try to fake me out/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIIGHT I LIKE THA BARRY LINE BUT DA R.KELLY LINE(S) ARE JUST PLAYED OUT

You juz mad cuz I got ya momma singin lutha cuz she askin can she "take me out", Im a versatile nigga, oppostie like Bac and NO doubt/

6-13 showz me you realy got skills, Ray charles shooting a gun with no bullets in a empty room gotta better chance at makin kills/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT I LIKE THAT PART LOL NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH FIX CHA STRTURE MAYNE ITS MESSING UP DA FLOW

OH shit, Ray charles is dead, So you aint gonna neva be successful, My lyircs like bullets you mught dodge a few but you gonna catch a vestfull/

Damn my ear hurts, sounds like the death bell ringing, My bad thats juz some of yo lyrics being rapped layered with some of ashanti's singing/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIGHT GOOD WORDPLAY NICE MULTI'Z KINDA AN GOOD FLOW THERE FIX CHA STRUTURE GOOD PUNCH THROWN ON DIS PART

Hear Ye, Hear Ye Royal T is speaking, I done knocked dis nigga pitch "Black" and now his "Well" is leaking/

Oh my bad I went over too, BUt unlike yo punk ass I aint gonna apologize, Imma juz wait till the votes come in, and I can claim my prize!!!!!!!!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT MAYNE NICE WORDPLAY "OK" PUNCH AND GOOD "OK" FLOW THERE

ROYAL-T= AIIIIGHT U HAD AN "OK" VERSE BUT DA FLOW ITS CHAPPED UP MAYNE U NEED TO ELEVATE ON STRUTURE AND PUNCHES THEY WERE GOOD BUT ELEVATE HOMIE

BLACKWELL- U HAD FLOW NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES WERE THROWN IN CHA VERSE

OVERALL= THIS WAS AN CLOSE BATTLE BOTH OF U HAD DIFFICULT OF FLOWING, THROWING PUNCHES,

BUT ROYAL-T HAD WORDPLAYS WHICH IS GOOD BUT DIDNT HAD NO PERSONALS AND NO FLOW

BLACKWELL- HAD PERSONALS AND GOOD PUNCHES AND DA FLOW WAS GOOD KINDA

SO I VOTE FOR- BLACKWELL CAUSE HE HAD FLOW AND PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND HIS PUNCHES MADE SENSE

ROYAL-T UR DID NOT EXPLAIN CHA PUCNHES AIIIGHT

*PEACE*