mess with me get cooked
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Voted For: spinn
So, What is up "spinn" I should thank you now for giving me a win,
You are back now, your ass is now my working station, Welcome in,
You have real bad skills I admit, No please, Dont shit, Just Quit it,
Leave this place before I leave you "Spinnin", And leave me winnin.
^^^^^^^^ NO PUNCHES EFFECT AT ALL
You wont be grinnin, You will be sad, Tell ya mom, IT WAS DAD!
Afraid of me to murk your mom like Nelly Walking out on Chad.
I will Drill the spinn motion to show you the pain of a real Spinna,
I am god Not his angel, I wil kill you, You a whack Shit Sinner.
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DIS PART U HAD FLOW BUT DEM PUNCHES WERE WACK HOMIE NEEDS TO ELEVATE
GODSANGEL- AIIIIGHT YO PUNCHES NEED ALOT OF WORK NEEDS CREATIVITY NEEDS PERSONALS
1-I’ll sticc a FORK through “Angel” so she can really feel the breeze//
2-Have wonna-be "GODZ" hated by many.like the taste of "blacc-eyed-peas"//
3-I called u out so do wut u do, like the “Baccstreet Boys” you’ll be left blacc & blue//
4-Listen chicc you’s a fake wit “jet-lag” cuz ya rhymes r weary’R than mine(jetlag=weary)
&^^^^^^^^^^^ MADE AN LIL EFFECT ON IT U HAD WORDPLAY DATS GOOD DISS ABOUT HIS NAME DATS AN PERSONAL
6-You could spit fast or slow & ya rhymes will always blow//
7-I wont even holla @ you girl..cuz I don’t spit at hoes//
8- You can’t think “off the top” like pigs with their cerebrum still intact//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT DISSING HIS GIRL THATS AN PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH DISSING HIS RHYMES DATS AN PUNCH NICE
SPINN- U HAD AN AIIIIGHT VERSE U HAD PUNCHES THAT ACTUALLY EFFECTED BUT ELEVATE WHILE U ON THAT ROAD AIGHT BE CREATIVE MAKE SOME ADJUSTMENT ON YO STRTURE
OVERALL= AIIIGHT DIS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE
GODSANGEL- U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES EFFETIVE U HAD FLOW BUT DEM PUNCHES WERE WACK U WASNT EVEN TRYING
SPINN- U HAD PUNCHES THAT EFFECTED THAT LAST 2 6 & 7 U HAD PUNCHES AND DA LINE 4 IT WAS AN WORDPLAY
VOTE-SPINN FOR ACTUALLY TRYING HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE EFFECTIVE
GODS ANGEL- YOURS WAS NOT CHA PUNCHES WASNT EFFECTIVE
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!
P.S.A
COMING SOON- GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW -THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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