mess with me get cooked
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Voted For: KahnShienz
I Grasp Hang Man, And Slice-His-Neck
And Put My *Nike's To His Dome* To Get His *Mind IN Check* =-
His Time-Is-Wrecked, Theres A New Kid On-The-Boards
Cause Kahn Come Wit A *Round Of Applause* To *Clap* At-This-Whore =-
Your Whole Styles-A-Bore, You Cant Take Kahn Out-Of-A-Battle
Cause I Got This *Baby Lookin Moist* Like He *Masterbating Wit Rattles* =-
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCHES NICE META'Z
Ya Whole Shirt-Is-Wet, How You Gonna Let Them Hollows-Hit-You
Shoot Quick And-DisMiss-You
Cause I *Grip More Nines* than *Freshman Grudges In School* =-
Fuck I-Really-Pitty-You, Cause My Punches Always-Land
And Sink Quick In Ya Chest Like Quicksand
Cause Like *KKK On Blacks* Now You Really *A HUng Man* =-
You Really A-Dumb-Man, Even Awnsering Was-A-Catastrophy
This Verse Will Cost-You-B
Cause I Got You *Hanging On My Words* Like *Apostrophys* =-
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE U HAD MULTI'Z AND PERSONALS AND PUNCHES THEY WERE DECENT NICE
KAHN- U HAD AN SWELL VERSE NICE PUNCHES NICE META'Z AND "OK" FLOW WORK ON THA STRUTRE, NICE MULTI'Z
u weak fuck get buck'ed face tucked unda the seat
beat ya down till ya style quits N forever decese
im the lyrical beast bless'in ya chest like a prist
never da lease i reless anger N bang-ya with a 2by4 N permanitly put u to sleep
if i strech my bar its cuz u'r a meal thats ready to get
(w)raped up
put da 4's to ya nostilas so u nose u gonna get blasted-up
^%^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT U MAKING THREATS NOT PUNCHES BUT U HAD "OK" FLOW FIX THA STRUTURE A LIL
freestyle only take sec u take a life time befor comein up with a tight-line
bit-mines N whind up with ya teeth broken bearly holding on to ya life-line
take ya N burn ya to ash then smoke ya on the air-plain to really be high
my flow like weed-smokers at 10, gonna keep burnin till i die
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIIGHT NICE MULTI'Z AND NICE GOOD PUNCHES MAYNE GOOD NICE
HANG-MAN= U HAD AN "ok" VERSE NEEDS TO WORK ON PUNCHES THOUGH SOME OF CHA PUNCHES MADE SOME EFFECTS BUT HIT HARDER MAYNE FIX CHA FLOW FIX CHA STRUTURE
OVERALL=
KAHN BEST LINE
Your Whole Styles-A-Bore, You Cant Take Kahn Out-Of-A-Battle
Cause I Got This *Baby Lookin Moist* Like He *Masterbating Wit Rattles* =-
^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PUNCH AND GOOD FLOW MAYNE
HANG-MAN BEST LINE=
freestyle only take sec u take a life time befor comein up with a tight-line
bit-mines N whind up with ya teeth broken bearly holding on to ya life-line
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH NICE META'Z
AIIIIGHT OUT OF THEM 2 PUNCHES I HAVE TO GO WITH KAHN HIS PUNCH CAME ALOT HARDER AND MORE EFFECTIVE MADE ME LAUGH TOO
HANG-MAN CHA PUNCH MADE SOME EFFECT GOOD PERSONAL NICE PUNCH BUT KAHN JUST CAME HARDER WITH HIS PUNCH
*NUFF SAID*
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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