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Old 11-22-04, 05:14 PM   #9
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

open: D:"YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW
Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it)" -Nice meta. Likin it

close: D:"Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me
Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine" again, good, on another level.

DrasticMeasurez best line: "If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst)
My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art" this is good aswel

Mentaly Ill's: "plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--" -Probably the best line. Was all ok tho.

Overall: Drastic's verse was real good and Mentally ill didnt match up. His use of personals was good but the verse just seemed weaker, with Drastc using good metaphors aswel as personals.

Unlucky Mentally Ill, iv no doubt you can be as good if not better than Drastic but not this time.
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