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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
This was pretty good. I dunno if its just me, but I sort of got an image in my head of a rich beverly hills type beachside community and a man parked outside in an expensive sports car fuming about losing his ex wife..
It was really good how you started on your topic from a very early part of the peice with this line:
"Constantly parked parallel to entrance of house in question…"
As soon as I read that, I knew exactly what this whole thing was about. And its probably what kept me interested throughout the rest of the peice.
Good shit bro..
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