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Voted For: Chaos
wow hang-man..
I don't know if you get this often but..you a garbage
lil nigga aint you? wow homie..this dude named martell
said he saw yo battles and you was tight..then I saw
this battle and went what the fuck alott times..
you know I aint hatin on you cuz I don't know you..
but the problems with your verse were..the rhyme scheme was VERY basic..structure was sorta fine ..but in a way wack..and for the most part..you used alot of gun shit..
don't do that here..
chaos did it too..but in a better way..
the way you did it..the threat WAS the punch..
Chaos I give your verse a 7/10 ..jus for wordplay..
now that's a honest vote ...
don't like it..complain about it lol
no hate..pc winner/Chaos
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