Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW
Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it)
^^^^no..... didnt like that intro
Ya punches aint hitting me cause ur writing on an soft pad
My rhymes are like an sharp scissor I’ll excrete ya rhymes to scrap
^^^^first line was nice
Kid says he’z mentally ill couldn’t be ill if u took so many pills
Calla me an quick sand cause iam leavin ya under with yo skillz
^^^yeah good idea but needed slightly better delivery
If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst)
My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art
^^^yup.... good
Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me
Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine
^^^^doesnt rhyme.... and last line wack... but the cellphone one was good
flow....was pretty boungy but structure wasnt bad... personals....not really but punches were there.. good verse

mentally ill.........
fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe--
dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes--
^^^^encridibly.............. WACK
those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool--
draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do--
^^^^LOL.... i like it
you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker--
cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers--
^^^^^no.....
plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--
^^^^^no......
you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy--
I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D--
^^^^no.......
overall mantally ill only had one good line.... otherwise drasticmeasures you win this easlily with a very good verse.....well done... return the favour and drop some votes on the battle on the sig.... thx

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