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Old 11-23-04, 12:03 AM   #16
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Voted For: Ultimatum

ultimatum took this with more creativity, punches, metas, multies, and word play...gods angel, you shoulda put more effort into that verse, because it had potential but you just left it undone...you had more lines that flowed better 2 me...I'm About To Bring You Hells Deamon,And Have You Heavily Wheezing
As My Punches Give You Trouble Like Still Births Breathing...............that is a tight line...str8 up PUNCH, so my vote goes to ultimatum...it was just overall better
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