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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe--
dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes--
(weak ass line...5/10)
those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool--
draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do--
(weak, way played, no creativity, 5/10)
you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker--
cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers--
(i know wat u mean, but weak and no flow, 5/10)
plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--
(decent puch for a NEWB, 4/10)
you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy--
I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D--
(last and best line...but isnt creative...6/10)

yo man, u need 2 elevate if you want to run wit guys like drastic...work on punches, creativity, wordplay, and for god sakes, battle people who arent as good....

YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW
Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it)
(decent opener, could be better, 7/10)
Ya punches aint hitting me cause ur writing on an soft pad
My rhymes are like an sharp scissor I’ll excrete ya rhymes to scrap
(nice bar, good wordplay, and creativity, and metas, 8/10)
Kid says he’z mentally ill couldn’t be ill if u took so many pills
Calla me an quick sand cause iam leavin ya under with yo skillz
(str8 up decent punch, creative, connects and hits 9/10)
If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst)
My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art
(feelin that one, 9/10)
Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me
Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine
(feelin that as well, ecept it doesnt flow right...8/10)

drastic your verse was weak compared 2 the shit ive seen you do, so i guess stay elevated, dont let up on shit, and stay str8 up fire...you used good wordplay in ure verse, the punches were all decent, and the flow was ok...the structure seemed a lil bit off tho...vote drastic...