*listening*
This shit sucks.....and I didn't even get past the intro. Flow was so fucking off it's not even funny. You could also use some fucking quality in your shit. "I'll be back next time....." Please don't
Honestly, none of your shit worked out. Your punches weren't even there. I could get on and freestyle into my nine dollar mic to a beat that was straight off the wall and sound better than you did.....and that's for real
Try a little harder next time...