yo.... i wana try out.... i'm mainly text... but here's a topikal i did bout 20 minutes ago when i saw a topik on RV i decided to have a go at writing bout it...... holla

Topic: “Blood Drenched”



[6:00 am] It begins……..

My watch reads 6:00 am, now it’s all about to start….
Adrenalins running, almost moving faster than my heart….
The clips are in, loaded…….. With balaclavas on….
Who no’s... maybe we’ll make it... or something may go wrong….
We all enter the van…. Confirming our plans….
Hands shaking, unsure, but we all believe that we can….
We drive by the police… who are completely unaware…
Or care that we are performing and operation which will bring death and fear….

[7:00am] Ready and loaded…….

We exit the van, hands on our gun handles….
Our sniper looks for good angles, while my other men scramble….
Through the ventilation shafts, face sweating with fear….
We peer through the gaps, no sign, the coast is clear….
The ropes are thrown down, we all slide down….
We are currently unnoticed, but all it takes is sound….
We crouch down, check the surroundings then gaze through the glass….
Guards are striding past, one of my men started picking the lock fast….
It was time at last, we kicked open the door…..
Civilians drop to the floor and bullets begin to soar……..

[7:35am] Clean break in………

There was quick and utter chaos, and the floor was stained red….
Five guards shot dead, one lying in a blood shed….
I sped to the alarm, typed in the stolen code to disarm….
I was pleased with my work, now I was slightly calmer….
I made the decision and my men moved into position….
It was an easy task now that we had taken out our opposition….
We jogged down the hallway, looking left and right….
There it was just a head, the vault was in sight….
We stopped in front of the door and set the explosive charges….
“BOOM” we stood pleased, while our problems list enlarges….

[7:55am] Trapped……….

There it was right in front of us, I put down my pistol…..
I walked to centre of the room, to examine the nuclear missile…..
I here shots out side… damn! Just lost my sniper….
My men pick up there guns and get ready to fire…..
We wheel the missile down the hall, until we hear footsteps….
We look left, ran out a door and we hadn’t even looked yet….
There they were waiting, about 30 members of the army….
Bullets begin flying, my friends dropping around me….
I leave the nuke, deciding it’s not worth my life…..
I’m on my own now and weapon less, except for my knife….
I climb into the ventilation, attempting to get away….
But then I stop…… and start clutching my chest in pain ….

[8:10am] Is this the end?..........

I lay in the vents… clutching my chest in pain…..
I had been shot, and now my clothes were a big blood stain….
I should have considered consequences, taking this job…….
And that would have stopped, me and my friends getting pointlessly shot….
I only thought of my self, and all the money I could get…..
Starting thinking of the past, man I wanted to be a vet…..
Why did I take this path, why was I greedy…..
Why did I not think before I started this bleeding…
Well this is it, I could feel it as my heart began to clench…..
Now all that was left was a terrorist and a blood drench…..

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