Look You Can't Tell Me I Ain't Elevate

Old Verse:

I'm a female emcee better known as a femcee
Bitches just can't see me lyrically
like a train wit coal I bring the heat
like a black hole my mind is just too deep
this game, a dog on a leash, and I'm walkin' it
wit shame you reign, cause I rap, U just talkin it

Better Verse #1:

Don't it sound like, somebody bout to die
And from the look on ya face, u about to cry
U see the things on my waist, u bout to meet ya maker
U better watch ya bitch cause I'm about to take her
Cause I can't stand no hatas I got da haymaker
Call me a hitwoman I'm bout ta get dat paper
U betta say ya prayers and repent your sins
For U, ya mama, and da rest of ya kin............


Better Verse #2:

I dream big dreams like I walk around sleep/U dream my dreams like your name was Mini Me/I got plenty needs/But I'll do it myself/Cause see I'm self-sufficient, I don't need no help/I know myself like the back of my hand/Look in the mirror and I see big plans/For da house of my life/And ain't nothin in this kitchen but sugar and spice/Cause see I'm nothin nice/My enemies scatter like mice/In my presence/Cause 10 years from now I'll be in Vibe, The Source, and Essence/I just can't help but drop lyrical bombs/Cause it's my ticket to buyin a thank-you house for my moms/I might be at the bottom, quickly headin for the top/I'ma explode like a shook-up bottle of pop/I'm like a runaway train I never know when I'll stop/But when I do I'll be one of the greatest/Not to mention one of the most hated/To date/Let me stop messin with your mind cause you need time to think............

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L-A-T

Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics In Holy Water No Wonder Dey Tryna Hold Me Under Longer
-Eminem "Renegade"

Dat Gurl Wit Da Vicious Flows And Tight Thighs
Niggas Wanna Sign Her And Make Her Dey Wife
-Love And Tears LAT