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Old 11-23-04, 02:38 PM   #20
Lethal-C
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

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YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW
Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it)
Ya punches aint hitting me cause ur writing on an soft pad
My rhymes are like an sharp scissor I’ll excrete ya rhymes to scrap
Kid says he’z mentally ill couldn’t be ill if u took so many pills
Calla me an quick sand cause iam leavin ya under with yo skillz
If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst)
My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art
Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me
Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine
6/10

Not Very Good Verse By DrasticMeasureZ Shit Kinda Feel off at the end and bar 2 and 5 din't even rhyme
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fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe--
dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes--
those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool--
draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do--
you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker--
cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers--
plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--
you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy--
I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D--
5/10

And Mentally Ill you spit was more basic than DrasticMeasureZ spit But your flow was better
Work on comin in wit a stronger verse and get big on vocab
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