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Old 11-23-04, 03:49 PM   #15
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

^^a few lines played like the stevie's eyes one.. HOWEVER, u had the better flow as well as the better closer.. was funny as hell rofl..
the only way youll beat me is if i bitch out and no show
but im here now time to knock this bitch out wit no flow
^rofl... funny, but the first half was a lil' played.. people use that all the time, but u go him, u kept punches consistent and you had a good flow i would said add a few multis here and there and maybe a couple of metaphorz.. (those are the best) in my opinion.. but this was kinda one sided..
my vote/ Lyric Revelation... return the favor hit up my battle in my sig..
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