Thread: PayDay is back with a lil something..."Erruptions" give me feedback...~1~
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Old 11-23-04, 11:32 PM   #4
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Flow was pretty good...structure needs a slight adjustment, but since your flow is good it's fine...vocab could be upped a bit, but overall a nice piece...keep at it.

Hit up my Open mics in my sig...thanks.
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