Voted For: .Indeph.
v/Indeph.
aight breakdown
inception-i realize this was a freestyle battle but yoyr lines first of all didnt rhyme too well at the end......your lines were really really strecthced.....so in part if completely screwed your structure.....you had decent flow............you lacked personals.....and i felt it was racisit in ways unless ur black you shouldnt have sai the black prez line or nukka...just made me feel ur verse a lil less is all..decent vocab but you stated his name too much which became like a filler in places...you coulda used his name and made a personal about it tho.......your punches were okay some were good some werent....overall 6/10
indeph.-aight i got this freestyle cuz one your lines had end rhyming..............your punches were hittin harder than his.......you had def a better structure than he did......you had a personal in there which was nice.........you also added humor which i like to see in a battle.....you coulda came with better vocab but its acceptable since it was a freestlye so you dont have time to think up big words...lol.......but nice drop flowed good too.....keep it up..........overall 8/10
best lines
inception-
Nukka My Strapz Iz Flagrant You Act Tuff, Then Get Smacked To Pavement
I'll Splatta Dis Rookie Lips On Da Rail-Roads So He Can Try An Re-Trackt His Statements
^^nice multi's
indeph.-
you desperate for any attention..mashing keys for press!..
you on your back..one sided..so it is no contest..
^^clever
I'm done waiting on this..pussy...verse to be released
eat some cherios..its the only way you get OOO's in ay peice..
^^humerous
v/Indeph.
return tha favor
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