hmmmm... this seems like you wrote it a while back... i don't know... it seems pretty simple and direct... i guess it was ok... not the best piece i've read... not the worst either ... i like a little bit more complexity and imagery with this type of topic... there is so much more you can do and so many words you can use to describe the seasons... this coulda been a much better piece if ya woulda took more time with it... one