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Old 11-24-04, 06:25 AM   #3
hipnoticz
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Originally Posted by LADY_T_
ssup ,,, sum good rymes there ..... structure needs a bit of a tidiyin up
most gud rymes....... wid deep meanin

dese lines were ma fav :

I don't catch battle raps I throw um'/

Some niggas is real and some niggas is fake...some niggas is Knives and some niggas is steak/

Some niggas survive and some niggas is bait/

overall structure needs bit of sortin an few of the lines ..........gud spit ova all

keep elevatin



not bad like he said realy but not bad at all good read
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