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Old 11-24-04, 08:43 AM   #19
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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€- : structure was good, flow was all right. Vocab was decent, wordplay too. You had some nice punches in there, the 5th line may seem bit basic at first but it's actually quite nice according to me. You had good intro with the whole DJ, spinning records thing.Your last line is a bit played, find a hot closer to totally finish him next time.But good drop!

Dj-KiD-> : opener was weak, you can't consider that a punch or personal whatsoever. 2nd line, you tried to play the whole pink/angel (feminine stuff) but nope, didn't work it out properly. 3-4 was uhm okay i guess but played. Last lines were all right i suppose but still nothing hardhitting. Get more personals, punches, up your vocab and wordplay!

No hating, just giving honest vote...
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