nice flow--matter of fact, excellent, structure was on point, no real faults anywhere, the vocab was perfect, not forced and not so simple.. overall i really liked this piece..

when the evil is tedius..we think that way
becuase of the media..its all in comparisin
compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you
narrow it..everyone knows..how to make a barrel
fit..commen knowledge..isn't with a bonding father
^^i liked all of these words.. the placement and flow.. very nice

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