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Old 11-24-04, 11:46 AM   #14
~Luciano~
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Voted For: enygma


U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living
None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming
2/10
I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather
I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater
1/10
You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new
In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew
3/10
Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor
Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters
1/10
Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds
Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown
1/10

Ya punches were weak
ya structure was off
ya metas werent there
yo similies were ok
you had no real personals
this battle was jus like a freestyle
real weak drop here kid


This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still
3/10
This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno
Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal
4/10
I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection
Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection
6/10
I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me
I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see
5/10
It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore
Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four
6/10

punches were ok
structure was good
metas were aight
similies were ok
ya personals werent really there
ive seen better from u
but it was enough 2 get a win i guess


Returned votes are alwayz welcome
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