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Old 11-24-04, 12:20 PM   #14
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Voted For: Chaos

My vote goes to Chaos...let me explain...

First of all, ContagiousVenomz, when i looked at your verse, i didn't feel like reading it at first, the structure with all those words in caps: FIX THAT! It's not fun to read! You had some nice punches in there but since you wrote such a long verse, i expect everything to be hot and that wasn't the case. When someone drops a long verse, i see it as: wow, they worked on it and they wanted to show us all these lines cause they're so dope. But you don't have that here. Some lines didn't make sense at all according to me and the flow was off at times but those personals and punches came pretty hard here and there.

Chaos : still that text colour, fix it! Lolz...i've seen a lot better from you to be honest, your flow and vocab were okay as usual. Wordplay could've been better and it could've used more hardhitting personals but you had some nice stuff in there actually. You kept it nice and simple, was easier to read. I liked the HIV-line (people, look at the other one's nickname and connect the two to get it...). I expect a better drop from you but you still won in my opinion.
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