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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
JONO
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Homie your in the wrong type of "Age", I got a hard time your anything older than the age of Six
Even if i coughed around you n made you "Sick", The rules made you lose it nigga cus unless your "Biting" off my lines there is no way you can "Spit"...
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^^nope…..stretched as fuck….decent attempt, but it got chu no where….played punch as well
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Shit, thanks to my Punches i'm leaving you with more "Wind" then a morning feels "Mist"
How come Jono had to leave this bitch dissed? The way im spittin now i deserve to be "Grindin" with Clipse..shit, leavin yo no name ass's tombstone engraved "Thanks to Jono too dissed to be missed"..damn
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^^decent attempt again, but nawwww….1st line: wack…
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I jus made another fan, jus cus i gave you myself to finally have somethin "Real" to measure as a man
It isnt jus your ass thats sweatin, my lines are causin you pores along with the sweat drippin down your glands, i could drop you in one "Punch" bitch Alakazam, I dont need more than a quick set of lines to leave you with a "Murked" Brand..
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^^nawwww dawg…..yo punches are horribly off….
My advice: shit, keep battlin and reading the battles of vets….work on wording yo punches better, think about what you typin…
JR FREEZE
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Dawg, ya seem uptight, let me *RELAX YA MIND* by *BLOWIN’ YA BRAINS ONTO YOUR COUCH*//
Cause yo *SPITS* is only *Sick cause ya Dad’s *DICK IS IN YA MOUTH*//
You Think you the *KING BEE*? Bitch, you just a little *MAGGOT~IN~A~TURD*//
Cause if *RAP* was a *RACE* with a *PREGNAUNT WOMAN*, you’d see this *FAGGOT~FINISH~3RD*// (Think!)
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^^nyce nyce….i got tha last line, creative….but, tha second line…naaawwww, dick in ya mouth lines is old…
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***PULLS THE TRIGGER***
Unless you *EAT OUT THE DEVIL’s ASS*, *HOT SHIT* is something you *NEVER~GON’~SPIT*//
Face it bitch, *YOU BEATING ME* will *NEVER GO DOWN* like the *NATIONAL DEBT*// (DAYUM!)
Let this be a lesson that *J.R.* don’t give a fuck about *YOU* or *WHATEVER~YOU~WRITE*//
Cause this faggot is just like a *$5 HOOKER’s PUSSY*, cause you’ll *NEVER~BE~TIGHT*//
Who you think you fooling in ya verse? All that *GANGSTA SHIT TALK* like you be *HARMING~MOST~MAN*//
I See the truth: You just be *TALKIN’ MORE SHIT* than a fuckin’ *CHARMIN~SPOKESMAN*//
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^^HOT SHIT!….im loving yo multis and punches…good job fam
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***TAKE THIS BITCH OFF LIFE SUPPORT!!!***
Face it faggot, you *JUST GOT MERKED* and I’d *SAY~IT~IF~I~CAN*/
But *BENT OVER IN FRONT OF YA BROTHER* is the only way you *TAKE~IT~LIKE~A~MAN*//
Lesson Learned: This faggot is just a *PIEGON* tryin to fuck with a *DESERT ~EAGLE~*//
Cause I’m *BEYOND* you, you lack *LOGIC* so you got *SUNK* like *REGGIE MILLER’S FREE~THROWS*//
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^^yep yep…onpoint fa reals…lines a lil off, but content was some of the best ive seen on this board..
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FLATLINE..............
I’ll physically ‘Stomp~Ya~Face~In’ til ya BRAIN ‘INFOSSILS~DA~PAVEMENT’ so ya THOUGHTS can TOUCH every SOLE of da ‘POPULATION’!!// (Sole=Soul)
Got ‘Glockks~For~Sprayin’ dat’ll parole the Doctors ‘OPER~ATIONS’ & leave BLOOD SPITTIN out this “CAT” like PUSSYHOLES IN ‘OV~U~LATION’!!//
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^^hot shit mayne…..i see you…you definitely know what you doin…mad props comin from me
My Advice: mayne, you doin it…but to keep yo verse on tha even, try to equally distribute tha multis…otha than that, you got tha fire…I see you doin it big on here….keep it up fam
so basically JR FREEZE took this, simply better verse, consistent and hard thru and thru….both emcees keep it up and elevate….JR, maybe we can battle sometime..
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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.
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