Voted For: .Indeph.

u both got similar names its pissin me off lol...any heres ma explanation.

inception i aint bein funny but u need ta elevate man...i were'nt feeling any of ya punches. You had a few good personals n thats about it. A lot of u r verses didnt rhyme also, so that was another downfall, but ya vocab is good n everything, but my advice is to keep practicing n analyze da vets styles n see what they do man with there punches. I aint talking bout da vets on dis site man coz there wack, go to www.holla-front.com and check out nyvillan18yrold. I learnt alot from dat kid. Most of da guys on that site are extreme veterans n when i say dat i mean they could literally shit allover carsonjett n them chumps. peace

Indeph man reason im giving this ta you is because of ya structure mainly. U r punches werent all that but they were there n u had the right set up, so thats good. i know it dun matter as much as personals but if you can make a good long word at the end of ya sentence it really helps, coz u can break it down wit multies, or just use 2 multies at da end of each verse, because when portrayed wit da right punch n set up it can sound dope ite....peace

My vote = Indepth