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Old 11-24-04, 02:54 PM   #13
J-Glass #77
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Ye" I like this shit, but just for advice if you can flow more clear so people can understand u it would be a lot better. ALSO dON''T TRY TO SAY TO MUCH IN ONE BAR KEEP IT SIMPLE . SOMETIMES SAYING TO MUCH IN ONT ONE OR TWO BARS MAKES YOU FLOW SOUND RUSHED fEEL ME!!!!! YouR voice and sassyness plus, the beat is bangin. keep up the Good work ONE

jAY-GLASS #77

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Originally Posted by [~*Lady Fiya*~]
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159833

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159833

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159829

^following rules! Those are three i been left feedback to..

aight this my first track.. thought i wasn't gonna do audio?! lol, yea but uhm props to my boi Diabolic (fam alwayz) for the beat: Biggie and his deep vocals on the track, the rest of the vocals are all mine... tell me what y'all think (should i stick to text?) lol.. it's A.I. bitches..
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Lady Fiya

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