*listening*

Intro says you're trying to express some emotions and yet it was really blah. Anyway, flow was nice, but the lyrics were kinda blah. Nothing really impressed me. I mean, it was alright, don't get me wrong, but you're saying the same shit as just about everyone. I'm feeling the emotion.....the flow actually fell off in a few spots because of your syllable counts. Anyway, keep dropping....you obviously got potential

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