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IP:
Nooooooooice...
Aiight Mayn, Hurry Up Indepth...
How Many Lines Can I Do Though???...
And Da-Iller One Or Whatever's Verse Is Weak...
Make Him Change It...
Lololmao, Na Just Fix A Few Things Kid...
You're Adding Like Little Things In Your Lines That Kill The Flow...
Ex. Is that an solar eclipse? I seen big black ball approaching the sky
Its blocking the sun. everyone’s stops and look up’s with fear glazing in there eyes
Take Out The "an" Before Solar n Make It "a"...
And Take Out The "in" After Glazing Cuz Its Unescisary......
Those Little Things Throw Your Shit Off...
The Reader Wouldnt Like It...
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