raw and powerfull....with some good vocab....and well...was just very well put...imagery was good too...


.. - gotta stop beating yourself up....for the demons shall eat your soul whole...and there will be nothing left..but a living corpse...make ammends of what you 'did'...by doign something with yourself...exorcise the ghosts by helping others and yourself....for it is obvios you are truly sorry and suffer so much for it... - ..sorry if that sounded patronising..but my two cents....i most definetly feel what you saying hard and deep...in a different context....but for real...i feel ya..

....respect...