damn...well i'll try and say what i can..but it seems Shaynea has disected this piece very well..so....

...first...it began so well...provided the setting...a basic picture....then it was like you began to add details...but also foundations...the dark picture got even darker and mirkier...and more graphic and 'gruesome'...a storm began brewing upon it too....and it seemed like a masterpiece of evil and darkness...but then came a glimmer of 'dark hope'....where her 'soul' could have been 'saved'....by an act which within itself is just as horrific and darkly as most....but what would of set her free....but no...instead this 'demon' wants more...and the picture begins to turn even more detailed..of pain and death...gruesome acts of devillish proportions...

...she can stand no more...she just wants to be free, but die in control...clouded by the darkness and evil before her...she frees herself with a sin of the darkest death....and the irony of it all comes into play...as her soul is free for just a short time...as she once again she comes back into the picture...now so dark and evil, grim and detailed, for this 'masterpiece' of evil has been completed by hell..where she shall be tormented for eternity....


thats the kind of thing i got out of it necro...one of the perspectives if you would....

...but it also raised some very valid questions in a subtle kind of way....like how can a god punish one who is being tormend so by the devil....and the only way she can then see out is to take her own life?....

....or how can society be so damned...that this kind of thing can happen?..is democracy really the way?....can we be TOO democratic?...and as this is happening - 20 mins drive away, others are living in relative luxury...etc. etc...many different points/questoin...


but for real...everytime you write a piece...in a way i feel it hard and deep....for your 'dark' soul and reality....and how you take us on a trip through it....is something that touches a nerve....lets just say...i fee most of the ish (maybe in a different context) you write for all the wrong reasons...


anyway...great piece...great talent to be able to write something like that....respect....