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Old 07-31-02, 12:33 PM   #2
varentao
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damn shaynea...that was most definetly a piece of pure emotions...

...it just seemed to drift effortlessly from one line to another....(or maybe thats just the mood i'm in right now)...but either way...really depicted the pure essence of the feelings and what not very well...



....and the ending...


your a shining star boy im not gonna be th eone to stop you from glowing......
and as this distance gros so much farther..and times for you get so much harder.....remember you can call upon me......
for love fate hope or destiney.....
empathy...


was well put...esepcially how you used just one word in the end...very few can do that to good effect...but you did....


...respect shay...keep yo head up and stay strong (but you always do, so you dont need me to tell ya that)....and as always...'the door is always open'...blah!..yeah thats a bit cliche...but its all good...respect...
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