FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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Voted For: ~LIL'DREW~
Dizzam, aight Lil Drew took this one hands down...the flow was better, the structure was a little bit off, he had better punches, metas, the creativity was WAY better....lemme break it down for you...
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the demons r back..........................call it return a da devil/
cause even if u were some stairs u wouldnt "reach my level"/
(THE FIRST LINE WAS PLAYED, BUT THE OVERALL CONCEPT WAS GOOD...7/10)
dis cat claims his rhymes r dope, and his flows r hard as brick/
i could inject his pen wit smallpox and his verse still wont be sik/ (NICE PUNCH, HIT DEAD ON...CREATIVE...8/10)
i could bury u wit a steak...den da beef would neva cease/
den give u two of my fingas so u could finally "REST IN PEACE"/(*1)
(HAHA, NOT SURE IF THAT COULD HAPPEN, BUT FUNNY AS SHIT)
cant no1 match my skills...............cause i lyrically kill foes/
and even if u swallowed acid rain, u wouldnt spit an ill flow/
(SIK LINE, ITS SIMPLE, BUT U GOT HIM WIT THAT...8/10)
(LIL DREW)
drew had tight flow, and concept...his topics werent commercial and werent played out... thats y he gets my vote...it was just better...and let me break down jjs' verse...
ill put u bac down,ill put u in plastic surgrey,
have u gon runnin when u beggin for mercy,-50
(NO OFFENSE, BUT SO PLAYED...NO CREATIVITY...4/10)
sticken wit one decision yet u have a change of heart,
backin down from a battle but u claim u hard,
(THIS ISNT 2 BAD, BUT NOTGOOD ENOUGH 2 B EFFECTIVE, 5/10)
dont no wat to do and yo gurl dont no how to handle dis dick,
and im on da formattel of battle when i battle dis trick,
(THIS LINE RHYMES WELL, BUT THE CONCEPT SEEMS WACK...BUT FUNNY SO 6/10)
cause i accepted dis battle,and im gon beat it,
so quit frontin trick and quit bein conseded,
(IF YOU READ URE VERSE, THIS IS JUST A REPEAT OF ANOTHER LINE, JUST RE-WORDED I THINK...MY OPINION, AND ITS 2 PLAIN 4/10)
juss some friendly competition,when im dishin out da pain,
lil drew on da front and his games da same,
(PLAIN END BAR...NEEDS 2 B MORE RAW...MORE CREATIVE, 4/10)
(JJFLOWSUM_5)
AIGHT MAN, NO HATE, BUT YOU JUST HAVE 2 DIG DEEPER IN YA HEAD MAN...U GOT SOME SKILL, AND FLOW, JUST TRY A LITTLE HARDER...NAH MEAN...IF YOU ELEVATE SOME, U WILL B AIGHT...~1~
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