Voted For: *Zeus*

v/*zeus*

breakdown
fatal-aight man you came real weak in this battle....you had no personals flowed well but no real punches were in there.....your structure was tha only thing u had over zeus....
you shoulda thought it out man.....no vocab and you just idk i wasnt feeling ya verse

zeus-aight u had horrble structure if you take out all the periods in it..dont try to compensate by doint that...unless its a pause then its aight some were pauses but some just didnt work as a pause....you had okay punches better than fatal...dont self glorify soo much tho....okay vocab put some multi's in there itll help ya flow some....

best lines
fatal-NIgga pleez wack emcees alwayz get beat.......
If i take ma shoes off den maybe u'll smell defeat(da feet).....

zeus-Ya Lyrics Aint Fatal....Run From Trouble Like A Baby Under The Table,
I'll Put Your Ass On That Flat Line....................See If You Stay Stable,
Your Unable To Defeat Me "Kid".......... Stay In Your "Baby Cradle"

v/*zeus*

return the favor links in the sig....honest explained
peace~1

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