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Old 11-24-04, 11:57 PM   #15
PheNom897
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I, you suck dog, trash ya keyboard.

Ya wordplay str8 anus, the hitler line is wack. we wouldn't have had a clue @ what you was tryin to say if you hadn't explained.

Ya flow is nasty in a bad way, work REALLY hard at it. Far as I'm concerned you still belong in regular Front Lines.

You should check out tutorials dog, right now. Raps not ya thing at the time, build ya skillz up some more then come back to do battle.

Mag ya verse was cool, I was feelin the Olsen Twin line, overall you pretty much out shined dude in every category. Whether it be wordplay,punches, metas you won.

Keep up the good work, overall you was 8/10
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