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mess with me get cooked
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aiiiiiight
str8in ya struture da flow is kinda chopped up
and put vocabs in cha open mics
its an good story mayne
but what really standed out was the feelings and the emotion
but work on the struture and flow mayne
*nuff said*
drop an open mic feedback
" expressing topicals"
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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