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Old 11-25-04, 12:45 AM   #32
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Voted For: Plutonium

string9487 :

this nigga just a Mule, cuz all u do is pack shit
neva heard ya single, guess u aint "radio"active
^^dope opener 9/10
eh yo when them rifle's click
they have yo ass scramblin for safety like Michael Vick
^^lol good bar nice consistency 7/10
I'll snipe this prick, got a vest thats twice as thick
but them things gon hit u, cuz lifes a bitch
^^good shit nice multies 8/10
im aimin at ya "bean", but nigga this aint Goya
u a ""gifted" rapper cuz i wouldnta paid for ya
^^weak 4/10
Dis g wanna bitch, u can recieve a hunnid clips
those rhymes so bad, they make Stevie wonda flinch(ooouch)
^^ lol good meta decent punch 6/10
dog u trippin, u need to get u some AK right
i spit Acid bars, make Plutonium, decay to Half-Life*
^^ i like the concept and meta 7/10
there aint nothin to u, u aint gon pop that
drop that, u just a pussey in a jock strap askin for is cock back(ooooh)
^^good multies 6/10
rap verse allowin hoes n sluts, wit no flows n such
wit crippled ass flows like they hold a crutch
^^decent bar good multies 6/10
unlike Jay, and Kells u the Less Of Both Worlds
n nebody that reads ya text, is gon hurl
^^just no 1/10
u can exit now... , but u wont b right back
cuz u like that, in the room gettin spanked by Mike Jack
^^wack 2/10

overall : 56/ 100 (56%)

Plutonium:

Like the weather...the chance of you winning is vain
like if you sold Strepsils...noone would choke in pain
^^good meta decent opener 7/10
your game...giving the word "failure" embarressment
claim you off da wack...when theres no comparisons
^^lmao good shit 9/10
don't be arrogant...your ego's the size of a elephant
he even think showin' his 26-19 record is triumphant
^^doesnt really rhyme but i see what u mean 4/10
I destroy you for enjoyment, so kid please don't fight
"Da Bury's Finest", that's why his corpse remains ripe
^^decent meta good punch 6/10
kid's not abstract...but you can't class him as object
kid's wack...no wonder Fashion's OPTIONAL SUBJECT!
^^wack 3/10
fact is this kid sucks, I'll destroy him with just a fork
who's using strings...a sewing machine does the work
^^lol good shit 8/10
kid's a jerk...I'll rip him up and fucking sew him again
the only highlight of his verse is when he just began
^^again began dont rhyme 0 points 0/10
the string's gonna snap...it don't matter how I say it
got numbers in his name...it's his wackness calculated
^^dopest bar of your verse good flow 10./10
to ranking 9487...that's more than RV's inactive heads
name's string...no wonder he's hanging on by a thread
^^dam hot 8/10
he can't go far in his career...even if it's his big dream...
CAUSE NOONE KNOWS HOW LONGS A PIECE OF STRING!!!
^^just stop 3/10

overall : 58/100 (58%)

v/ Plu
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