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lyrically.. you got some dope metaphores.. but your flow is shaky.. try an open flow.. let it flow.. you always cutt your words off at the end of ya bar.. let it flow intot the next or just say the word completly.. when u spit, you shoudlnt have to cutt off your word to get it to flow.. jsut work on ya flow.. the rest will come when you find ya style.. -1
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