Its kinda weird looking at the rap game, from outside..
Trying to define, what’s hot and what’s not, brakes my spine..
/\ nice rhyming there good opener

I find the ignorant people who’s hating on rap music..
Is waiting, hearing Chingy & Ja Rule abuse it..
/\ So so true

Or losing it, from all the harsh beef that’s constantly started..
By rap artists, who got heart for pop charts & markets..
/\ nice bar there

I’m Stressing their just investments, treated like Guinnie pigs..
Simply product of a recipe born and dead quick..
/\ Nice rhyming again

Ever since Pac died, the image of commercialism..
Followed a certain system, so distant to first visions..
/\ word

How raps created and how ya sposed to make it..
They just fake it, for cheap thrills, the moneys there for the taking..
/\ some deep lyrics there these are very good so far

I’m aching to see some emcees step to the plate..
And send the rest of the wanna-bees, straight through the exit gate..
/\ WORD

To show these fucking idiot kids, what raps really about..
Fuck judging us from MTV, get that BS out..
/\ W33RD

I see less clout, with making bad false assumptions..
Cause these obstructions anger me, more then morbid abductions..
/\ Dope rhyming

Some commercial productions, get the problems mixed up..
Thinking pop is what we want, but not really giving a fuck..
/\ Word

About our music, just the other day, I watch a TV show..
Some dumb ass hoe said rap emotionally blowed..
/\ nice flow

Its that sort of statement, that really makes my head explode..
Leaves me with little hope, if times are changing their to slow..
/\ nice closer

Its bullshit..
/\ when u put this into echo try and use an echo feature for this small bit

Overall
This was a dope piece some real drama and emotion behind this hopefully there will be more verses but the flow was real easy to follow fuck structure if this is a writing for an audio the lyrics and meaning behind it were dope...assonance was used...and used to perfection...this grants an 8.5/10 from me...and thats good i ws very impressed with this piece.

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