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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
A life without freedom isn’t really a life…
If I couldn’t be a free man, kill me tonight…
3/10
We take it for granted, but we know is essential…
People who aren’t free can never reach their potential…
5/10
Gifts go ignored, when you’re shackled in life…
I’m just so thankful, that we tackled the strife…
3/10
Chains and bars, cuffs and ropes…
Every one of them can cut ya hopes…
2/10
But more than that, when dreams are suffocated…
Ideas are desecrated, instead of demonstrated…
7/10
Everyone can contribute, but most think they’d be ignored…
Which is sad because their ideas should be explored…
3/10
To some freedom doesn’t mean to not be chained…
But to be listened to thoroughly, and not feel shame…
3/10
Government isn’t the only thing that takes freedom away…
It could be a parent to a kid, or a homophobe to a gay…
1/10...No
We can be put down, that’s when we need the strength to get back up….
But some just give up, mentally aren’t strong so they just pack up…
2/10
But not me, I’d say Patrick Henry said it best…
It’s either, “give me liberty or give me death”…
5/10
This was an ok drop
ya wordplay was ok
it could of been better
it was like u kinda was jumpin around
so u need 2have ya vision clear
My mental capacity had the audacity to keep asking me
how I actually slept at night while I comitted blasphemy
6/10
Naturally, I laughed at the thought of a thought harrassing me
Attacking me until reality started surpassing me
5/10
My conscience revealed the contents of an obnoxious
Ignoramous trapped in his own cage without a locksmith
7/10
yearnin' to lift the burden...stop the pain, reduce the hurtin'
Preferring a higher learnin' than post-existential burnin'
6/10
Now a new man is emergin'... the other dead in the sea
setting the scene, becoming what he was destined to be
3/10
That textbook definition of freedom was insufficient
Intentionally put together to favor certain conditions
6/10
We're worshipping chains when chains were used when murdering slaves
our cars became "whips"... ancestors turning in graves
5/10
See the logic? Our master was replaced by objects
The slave quarters of yesterday are today's projects
6/10...Nice concept
neglected ... disrespected ... rejected ... and unprotected
our psyche has been molested; old wounds became infected
6/10
my aim is to lay claim to my mind and exchange my perceptions
by asking questions in countless sessions of life's learning lessons
4/10
then i'll boldly go where no man or no fear can ever hold me
and holler out "Kunta Kinte!!!" while the rest still think they're Toby
6/10
nice wordplay
nice vision
wha u were tryin 2 get across stood out
and ya wordplay went well with your vision
overall this was a nice topical battle
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