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Old 11-25-04, 03:34 PM   #8
DrasticMeasureZ
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listen up mad dog your audio banjo song clearly sucked
but mad dog you are kinda gettin used to havin audio fucked
-"EH" KINDA DIDNT MAKE SENSE BUT GOOD FLOW HOMIE NOT AN GOOOD PUNCH

I mean your just a plain faggot you think your verses are kool
bitch your rappin like a clown and your middle name is fool
-"EH" PLAYED NOT AN GOOD PUNCH ELEVATE ON THEM PUNCHES HOMIE GOOD FLOW THOUGH

Stupid ass every single word of yours gets me frustrated
It's like your such a bitch you actually like to be hated
-"EH" AGAIN NOT AN GOOD PUNCH...ITS NOT EVEN HARD HITTIN


you think you it and I wish you died at birth in ya minites
mad dog is just born retarded but pretends he don't give a shit
-HUH WTF.................NO-NO NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


mutha fucker whach where ya steppin I shoot ya wid ma weapon
my verse shits on you teachin you dumass a big lesson
-KINDA PLAYED AND NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


You an't nothin but it hurts me dat you say dat ur somethin
Okay hear it is your GAY now bitch learn to quit frontin
cause im'a keep sonnin while ur in a van wid dad humpin
-"WHOA GAY PUNCHES ARE PLAYED" COME CREATIVE THAN THAT


Your just twisted you'll never gonna be the one who's gifted
your the type to get punched in ya fat face knock down hitted
-O AIIIGHT I FELT THIS ONE GOOD ONE NICE


I'll smack the fuckin shit outat ya till ya fall on right on ya back
fuck you up bitch punch your back till your fuckin vetibrai snaps
-ITS NOT DECENT BUT ITS AN PUNCH "OK"

every word Im spittin his gettin your stickin ass down n pitted
as soon as you read dis you'll have both wrists on ya slitted
Just go home dog i'm leavin you dead wid your head splitted
- NOT AN GOOD CLOSA, PLUS NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


ALRIGHT THIS WHOLE VERSE KINDA WACK~!, NO HARD HITTIN PUNCHES, NO PUNCHES WERE DECENT, BUT GOOD FLOW AND STRUTURE , BUT WORK ON THEM PUNCHES ELEVATE AIIIIGHT
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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