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Old 11-26-04, 01:04 AM   #15
YOUNG_CITY
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frein, yo lines were too simple to me, and ur structure was fucked up...i think u should work on that...ur punches didnt really land, and i seen no creativitie in yo verse...
jm...(dumb name)...u had some nice punches in there also, and yo structure was also poor, but won in this case,...both yall lines were stretched to me...but w/e...u had some nice mettas in there also, and thats why i gave u da win, cause u had a all around better flow to me...but most of yall stuff was simple...
weak battle kids, work on that