Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP:
I spit, to make the mic like a flammable torch
'It's understandable' my mind is a mechanical force
/\ good opener stright to the title
And I'm a cannibal my mandible is chewin' ya corpse'
I'm tyrannical, a vandle of intangible sorts
/\ good wodplay aight rhyme
Not a mineral a mammal or an animal,
I'm. Metaphysical, the syllables in critical rhymes
/\ hmm no rhyme
Flows blowin' off ya limbs like invisible mines
Been invincible with rhymes since the biblical times
/\ good rhyming nice flow
A warlord with a sword from the Mongul Horde
Speak the tongue of the lord, to bless my vocal chords
/\ good rhyme
They tried to resurrect hip-hop, but faith is gone
So I'll take it over by force like Ghengis Khan
/\ Gone and khan don't rhyme...sorry
If you say it ain't raw, you better pray to Allah
Cuz I got an arrow that'll travel straight thru the jaw
/\ Neither does this
Got breath control, flow like a ship with a sail
Divine when I spit, like if I sipped from the grail
/\ good closer
Overall
This was an aight piece a lil short but you got some potential however u slipped on a couple of lines...no problem elevation should fix that good piece 6.5/10
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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy
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