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Old 11-26-04, 10:27 AM   #18
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Voted For: FrankieFive

eh battle

punches- MR harder hittin
personals- F5 more of em, and harder hittin
multis- Neither
metas- F5 for havin em
wordplay- F5 for havin it i guess
humor- F5, i smiled
structure- MR overall better lookin
flow- MR just went together better

F5 aight verse. U need to work on personals, punches, and use some better word play. Liked the punchlines, but the structure is kinda off.

MR not your best work. punches were aight, one personal, no word play, no multis. gotta put more thought into ya verse.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/FrankieFive

pz