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Old 11-26-04, 11:22 AM   #10
Parallel
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this was dope multis used well but try shortening your lines and keep the multis like 6-13 sylables thats what i do...unlees there short words...you know..flowed better and looks better but good otherwise becuz you used the multi good this was good drop take my advice and drop another fast so i can read it to
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