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Old 11-26-04, 11:26 AM   #2
the omen
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hmnmmm. a fresh new q track, lets see

intro is correct. lol at youre story in the begining. LMAO! i hope this isn't true.

first verse. quality isnt top, but lyrics are on point, maybe turn 'em up a lil, but i like you're style, you're like a lil biggie. good rhyme format. get a good mic, you're ready for one, it'll improve much more. im fixin to get a better one soon too. but yea, i thought there would be a second verse in here, maybe i missed a pause or something but this all just seemed like on big verse to me. but u came correct. good lukin. kep droppin. get at me. pz
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