Voted For: FrankieFive

i think that Frnakie took this hands down....just a better overall verse except for his structure...ya fam work on your structure and harder hitting punches and you could elevate....

Mistic your wack just start over and go reaad some tutorials or something...cmon now how are you gonna rhyme "this" with "this"....work on everything....

v/frankie

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